1）采用复数形式。

Sexist: When bathing a baby, never leave him unattended.  

Revised: When bathing babies, never leave them unattended.

给婴儿洗澡时，一定要时刻在他们旁边照管。

2）用we／us／our改写原句。

Sexist: From each according to his abilities, to each according to his needs.

Revised: From each of us according to our abilities, to each of us according to our needs.

各尽所能，按需分配。

3）改用第二人称。  

Sexist: No man knows his true character until he has run out of gas, purchased something on an installment plan and raised an adolescent.

Revised: You don't know what your true character is until you have run out of gas, purchased something on the installment plan and raised an adolescent.

只有当汽车没油、分期付款购物和抚养青春期的孩子时，人的本来品性才会显露出来。

4）改用被动语态。

Sexist: One who, when he has the choice of two evils, chooses both. Revised: One who, when given the choice of two evils, chooses both.

当面对两种罪恶要做出选择的时候就两个都选。 

5）完全省略代词。

Sexist: What does a person thinks of after he becomes a deportee?  

Revised: What does a person thinks of after becoming a deportee?

一个人被驱逐之后会作何感想呢？

6）用冠词替代。  

Sexist: Can a critic give his opinion of...？  

Revised: Can a critic give an opinion of...？  

评论家能评论...吗？

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