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[作文分析]
1.题型:这是一篇议论文写作。
2.写作文脉结构
1)电话给人们生活带来的方便;,
2)电话普及后通讯方式的改变;
3)作者的观点。
Telephone or Letter
Communication is very important both in the past and at present, and it tends to be more essential in modern society. Telephone and letter are two main means of communication, and they both have their advantages and disadvantages.
Communication with other people by telephone is very convenient, especially when you have something urgent. For example, if one of your family members is seriously ill at night, and you don't know how to deal with it and where to find a doctor or a taxi. A telephone is the answer. Dial 120 and you will get services from the doctor very soon. In addition, with the quick rhythm of life, people usually don't have as much time to write letters as before, again telephone solves the problems. Friends can chat through the wire. It seems that telephone shortens the distance between people. Men can keep in touch with each other more easily.
However, still some people prefer writing letters to communicate with friends. First, sending a letter is much cheaper than having a telephone call. Second, people can not only greet each other but also exchange their thoughts in letters. Because when a person writes, he must organize his mind and express his ideas and feelings more logically, while telephone often makes people lazy. Finally, people easily keep secret in the letter and say whatever you want to say, while they sometimes can't do that in a telephone.
In my opinion, you can combine these two ways together: some unimportant things can be expressed by a telephone, while some important or unspoken things can be done by a letter. 【已有很多网友发表了看法,点击参与讨论】【对英语不懂,点击提问】【英语论坛】【返回首页】
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