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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Online Shopping. You should write no less than 120/150 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 很多人开始在网上购买商品
2.网上购物可能存在的问题
3.我的看法
Online Shopping
首段:3句话= 背景+事实描述+举例说明
The past decade has witnessed the huge advancement of Information Technology (背景描述). And shopping through the Internet has gained great popularity among web suffers(主题事实描述). For instance, it can be noticed that an increasing number of youngsters purchase clothes, books, electrical equipment and the like on Taobao, EBay and Alibaba。(举例法扩展段落) (或:A case in point is the Group Purchasing, which attracts thousands of customers. 举例+定语从句)
2段:问题分析4句话 = 主题句+ 危害1+危害2 +危害总结
In spite of the convenience and low price of this shopping, others argue that we can not turn a blind eye to its negative aspects. Firstly, they point out that the quality may not be as superior as it is described and sometimes, it is possible for customers to buy fake commodities. In addition, many customers find it troublesome to make a change when they are not satisfied. As has been noted, these do exert bad impacts。
尾段:解决措施(即我的看法)3句话 = 总说+建议+展望未来
As a customer, I am convinced that effective measures should be taken to enhance it。
(总说看法) To be specific, it is suggested that regulations and rules should be worked out to scrutinize online shop owners.
(或者:Specifically, shoppers are well-advised to be alert when purchasing online。)
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