宁柏宇早晨起床，他睁开双眼，他闭上双眼。

　　(汉语情感分句，感情到了就分，没错)

　　Ningboyu got up in the morning, he opened his eyes, he closed his eyes.

　　(英文逻辑分句，逗号不能连接两个完整的句子，错误。因为Ningboyu got up in the morning. He opened his eyes. He closed his eyes. 三句都是完整句子，即可以单独成句，仅用逗号不能连接，如果非要连，中间要加连词。Ningboyu got up in the morning, he opened his eyes, and he closed his eyes.)

　　4 修改，对雅思橡皮不要有太高预期，如果加长句子，可以采用加入符号配合注释的方式，比如

　　①

　　Ningboyu got up in the morning, ∧and he closed his eyes.

　　然后在文章写完之后，空一行，写上 ① he opened his eyes, 不过此法不能贪多，不能用到⑥⑦⑧...

　　四、检查：找最明显的拼写和语法错误，不要留给考官，另外可以用一些有level的词或句型替换初稿中的某些词句。

本文选自《新东方宁柏宇》的博客

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